Attempt # 2.
"Look at this lobster - I got it today, and it is dead." - by Ben
"What on earth have you brought me, and the worst part about it is you call it food!" - by Sydney
"What is that thing, because it does not look like food!" - by Olivia
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Thursday, 28 January 2016
Speed Week Sentences - Week 16
Speed Week Sentences have evolved. We are now given the task of writing a sentence for a given Far Side comic. Then, when revising, we are to write a second sentence, join it to the first with a conjunction word, and add adjectives and adverbs to improve our sentence. Here are the results from our first attempt at this.
"This is a rocket, but it sucks." - Lanny
"I have created a rocket, but it does not look like the picture!" - Morgan
"Why does our rocket look so weird, and why is it crooked?" - Keegan
"This is a rocket, but it sucks." - Lanny
"I have created a rocket, but it does not look like the picture!" - Morgan
"Why does our rocket look so weird, and why is it crooked?" - Keegan
Thursday, 14 January 2016
Speed Week Sentences - Week 15
This is the last week that we will be doing SWS in this format. Next week the students will be given a comic picture and will have to write a caption for it. This week, they were expected to use the word "said" and then change it to a more descriptive word.
The boy shouted that he jumps on books. - by Ryan
Yesterday she shouted, "PIGS ARE VERY AWESOME!" - by Elly
Griffin truly asked, ''Why does Emma like wonderful cheese?'' - by Katie
The boy shouted that he jumps on books. - by Ryan
Yesterday she shouted, "PIGS ARE VERY AWESOME!" - by Elly
Griffin truly asked, ''Why does Emma like wonderful cheese?'' - by Katie
Speed Week Sentences - Week 14
For our first SWS of the New Year, students had to use the word "laughed" in their sentence. After revising, they were to have a more descriptive alternate for "laughed" and some added adjectives/adverbs. Here are this week's top vote-getters.
I giggled at the very,very humorous joke! - by Keegan
People chuckled at me. - by Luke
He giggled when his clever dog read a book. - by Emma
I giggled at the very,very humorous joke! - by Keegan
People chuckled at me. - by Luke
He giggled when his clever dog read a book. - by Emma
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