Search This Blog

Thursday, 28 January 2016

Speed Week Sentences - Week 17

Attempt # 2.



"Look at this lobster - I got it today, and it is dead." - by Ben

"What on earth have you brought me, and the worst part about it is you call it food!" - by Sydney

"What is that thing, because it does not look like food!" - by Olivia

Speed Week Sentences - Week 16

Speed Week Sentences have evolved.  We are now given the task of writing a sentence for a given Far Side comic.  Then, when revising, we are to write a second sentence, join it to the first with a conjunction word, and add adjectives and adverbs to improve our sentence.  Here are the results from our first attempt at this.



"This is a rocket, but it sucks." - Lanny

"I have created a rocket, but it does not look like the picture!" - Morgan

"Why does our rocket look so weird, and why is it crooked?" - Keegan

Thursday, 14 January 2016

Speed Week Sentences - Week 15

This is the last week that we will be doing SWS in this format. Next week the students will be given a comic picture and will have to write a caption for it. This week, they were expected to use the word "said" and then change it to a more descriptive word.

The boy shouted that he jumps on books.  - by Ryan

Yesterday she shouted, "PIGS ARE VERY AWESOME!" - by Elly

Griffin truly asked, ''Why does Emma like wonderful cheese?'' - by Katie

Speed Week Sentences - Week 14

For our first SWS of the New Year, students had to use the word "laughed" in their sentence. After revising, they were to have a more descriptive alternate for "laughed" and some added adjectives/adverbs. Here are this week's top vote-getters.

I giggled at the very,very humorous joke! - by Keegan

People chuckled at me. - by Luke

He giggled when his clever dog read a book. - by Emma

Thursday, 17 December 2015

Speed Week Sentences - Week 12

For our last week of Speed Week Sentences before Winter Break, we were asked to use the word "ran" before revising and editing.  Here are the 4 sentences that received the most votes.

I sprinted in order to not be late. - by Juliana

Today I darted to the bus. - by Lake

I bolted home immediately from school today. - by Rylie

I raced against a train outside today.  - by Tyler

Speed Week Sentences - Week 12

"Like" was the word of the week for Speed Week Sentences during week 11.  See how the students changed it to be more descriptive.

I love my joyful and tiny dogs. - by Olivia

My sister and I absolutely admire playing board games together. - by Sydney

He loved trains and happy trains. - by Ben

I truly love chicken. - by Lanny

Tuesday, 8 December 2015

Speed Week Sentences - Week 11

Can you figure out which word the students may have started with this week?  Here's a hint: it starts with the letter <p>.

There truly are some EXTREMELY exquisite flowers. - by Kyle

I live with a very beautiful book. - by Ryan

My face is not lovely today. - by Nate